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The morning hunt

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Forest so quiet
sun rising slowly in peace
feeder going off

stalking toward the blind
shifting the rifle in place
then i see my buck

instincts take over
with a round in the chamber
i squeze the triger

as swiftly as that
i harvested my buck
thank god for my buck





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Neytiri said...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 1:48 pm
Very, very good!! I like it!! x x x
 
sunshine7223 said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 4:47 pm
Well, the only critique I can really have is the fact that you forgot the other E in squeeze. I personally would never go hunting, or harm in animal in anyway. But that is just me. So I cannot relate to this persay, but I do however think you did a great job! I loved the ending! And I am sure someone who likes to hunt will enjoy this also! :))
 
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