November 8, 2011
By Tiwaz SILVER, Jackson, Missouri
Tiwaz SILVER, Jackson, Missouri
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Frenzied graphite strokes

A tentative figure forms

From paper comes life.

The author's comments:
*shrug* Something I did for a poetry contest; thought it wasn't too bad.

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on Mar. 18 2012 at 12:02 pm
EPluribusUnum DIAMOND, Woodbine, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;
I lift my lids and all is born again.
(I think I made you up inside my head)."
-Sylvia Plath

This is really good, it says so much in so little! It takes a lot of skill to write a haiku like this.

on Mar. 17 2012 at 10:07 pm
dreamshaker GOLD, Clarkston, Michigan
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This was lovely <3
I never think I like haikus very much, but something beautiful like this always comes along and leaves me stunned.

It's amazing how much power you packed into three lines - I could never express something so gorgeous in so few words.

on Nov. 20 2011 at 2:06 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
45 articles 9 photos 565 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

It's a cool little haiku!  I especially like the picture, it goes so well together. :D


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