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Frenzied graphite strokes

A tentative figure forms

From paper comes life.



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EPluribusUnumThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 18, 2012 at 12:02 pm:
This is really good, it says so much in so little! It takes a lot of skill to write a haiku like this.
 
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dreamshakerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 17, 2012 at 10:07 pm:
This was lovely <3
I never think I like haikus very much, but something beautiful like this always comes along and leaves me stunned.

It's amazing how much power you packed into three lines - I could never express something so gorgeous in so few words.
 
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savetheplanet said...
Nov. 20, 2011 at 2:06 pm:
It's a cool little haiku!  I especially like the picture, it goes so well together. :D
 
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