Silent MAG

October 31, 2011
By blackmist BRONZE, Houston, Texas
blackmist BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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My mouth may be sewn
shut, but my eyes are ever
vigilant, watching.



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on Mar. 4 2012 at 7:55 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

A whole new way to look at silence---intense, dark. It was interesting~

on Nov. 4 2011 at 10:59 pm
nikkigonefishin GOLD, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
" A smile is worth a thousand words"
" The purpose of the writer is to keep civilization from destroying itself."- Albert Camus

I can definitely relate to your poem. I am like that alot and I liked the way you conveyed your message through simplicity yet its like you carfully chose the words. Great job:)

illusions GOLD said...
on Nov. 4 2011 at 2:41 pm
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
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GREAT JOB!!! CHECK ME OUT AND COMMENT PLZ!!!!

ace1897 SILVER said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 8:27 am
ace1897 SILVER, Pellston, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"boys are blue, girls are pink... we do not make purple :)"

This is a really amazing poem! I enjoy to write haiku as well, and this is a great poem!!!

Blaker GOLD said...
on Nov. 2 2011 at 3:45 pm
Blaker GOLD, Portland, Maine
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This is awesome! I really love the emotion in it. It always amazes me how short haikus are, but they (or at least some) still manage to go so deep. Your poem is a great example of that.


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