And the worst part is
Even though I hate you now
I'll always love you
Even though I hate you now
I'll always love you
Thank you so much! That means a lot!! Yeah you're probably right, I just couldn't very well put "dislike" in their, seeing as it's two syllables haha :) Thanks for your critiques, they help a lot!
Gingersnap777Arghh! I wish I could write haikus like this. It's so smooth and natural sounding! One question: isn't 'hate' a teensy bit of a strong word?
See above comment, I clicked the wrong thing whoops! And replace the "their" with "there." I can't believe I did that actually! That's like my pet peeve. Sorry! :)
HEMS27 said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 10:40 pm:
Nov. 4, 2011 at 10:40 pm:
Amen! I have felt that way so may times! And thats exactly the emotion I feel! Great job!
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