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Even Though

And the worst part is
Even though I hate you now
I'll always love you




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AlwaysDanceInTheRain said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 5:30 pm:
Thank you so much! That means a lot!! Yeah you're probably right, I just couldn't very well put "dislike" in their, seeing as it's two syllables haha :) Thanks for your critiques, they help a lot!
 
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Gingersnap777 said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 10:32 pm:
Arghh!  I wish I could write haikus like this.  It's so smooth and natural sounding!  One question:  isn't 'hate' a teensy bit of a strong word?
 
AlwaysDanceInTheRain replied...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 5:36 pm :
See above comment, I clicked the wrong thing whoops! And replace the "their" with "there." I can't believe I did that actually! That's like my pet peeve. Sorry! :)
 
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HEMS27 said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 10:40 pm:
Amen! I have felt that way so may times! And thats exactly the emotion I feel! Great job!
 
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