Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Even Though Even Though By AlwaysDanceInTheRain, Sidney, NE More by this author Even though I hate you now I'll always love you « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 4 comments. Post your own! Report abuse AlwaysDanceInTheRain said... Nov. 14, 2011 at 5:30 pm: Thank you so much! That means a lot!! Yeah you're probably right, I just couldn't very well put "dislike" in their, seeing as it's two syllables haha :) Thanks for your critiques, they help a lot! Report abuse Gingersnap777 said... Nov. 13, 2011 at 10:32 pm: Arghh! I wish I could write haikus like this. It's so smooth and natural sounding! One question: isn't 'hate' a teensy bit of a strong word? AlwaysDanceInTheRain replied... Nov. 14, 2011 at 5:36 pm : See above comment, I clicked the wrong thing whoops! And replace the "their" with "there." I can't believe I did that actually! That's like my pet peeve. Sorry! :) Report abuse HEMS27 said... Nov. 4, 2011 at 10:40 pm: Amen! I have felt that way so may times! And thats exactly the emotion I feel! Great job!