The Sea MAG

October 15, 2011
By redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"


Inhale salty air
Swish it around and spit it
Out like a mouthwash



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on Oct. 22 2014 at 2:13 am
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD, Irvine, California
13 articles 1 photo 303 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments which take your breath away.

You are only as strong as your weakest link.

Interesting! I suppose this kind of links to the idea that you can taste certain odors if they are strong enough :P Great job!

KatsK DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 5 2012 at 9:45 am
KatsK DIAMOND, Saint Paul, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Being inexhaustible, life and nature are a constant stimulus for a creative mind.
~Hans Hofmann
You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you.
~Ray Bradbury

This is really good. Although it's short, it's just specific enough to give the reader details.

on Oct. 22 2011 at 6:11 pm
CraftyCinamatic SILVER, Ponte Vedra, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fall in love? I'd rather fall in chocolate"







- Me :D

Good "sensory details" LOL The thought of spitting it out like mouthwash creates a feeling of how salty and thick the air must be


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