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Inhale salty air
Swish it around and spit it
Out like a mouthwash

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TheSkyOwesMeRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 22 at 2:13 am
Interesting! I suppose this kind of links to the idea that you can taste certain odors if they are strong enough :P Great job!
 
KatsK This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 5, 2012 at 9:45 am
This is really good. Although it's short, it's just specific enough to give the reader details.
 
CraftyCinamatic said...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 6:11 pm
Good "sensory details" LOL The thought of spitting it out like mouthwash creates a feeling of how salty and thick the air must be
 
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