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September 25, 2011
By __horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous


Watch time fly
And land on your shoulder
Whisper
Watch it go
And wonder
What it knows.



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on Jan. 24 2012 at 7:45 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

thanks. you wrote a hakiue about a log i really liked :p--the placement of words in the last two lines was brilliant. "I (line break) will probably bite" i think it was. i favorite-d it.

on Jan. 23 2012 at 4:48 pm
Imaginedangerous PLATINUM, Riverton, Utah
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This was really cool. I like how you twisted the expression 'time flies' into some really cool imagery.

on Oct. 14 2011 at 2:28 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

note to readers--this isn't really a hakiu, but i couldn't put it as any other type of poem because there are too few words. sorry...:)


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