Unfortunately Mute

September 13, 2011
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This shy, foolish girl
Has pushed you away because
No words will come forth.

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jasont727 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 24, 2011 at 3:57 pm
The message is simple yet elegant--it is sometimes difficult to speak up, and that can be destructive. It is odd to think that words are so easy to come up with, yet so difficult to say or write--and how much or an impact they have on others. Thank you for the message, the haiku is beautiful.
heartoftheocean95 replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 8:09 pm
Thank you for your encouraging words! I find this haiku to be true often in my life. But I'm learning to be brave enough to speak.  Takes some practice though.
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