Water Mirror

Fingertips trailing
Tracing a liquid image
Ripples interrupt





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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 5, 2011 at 5:30 pm
This bore, in my mind, a suggestion of the quiet tragedy of the way that one looks at a beautiful reflection in the water and wishes so much to touch it. When touched, however, the reflection is distorted. But I still think this haiku was beautiful. And peaceful, in a way.
 
savetheplanet replied...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 6:08 pm
Thank you! :)   It was a more quiet, thoughtful haiku.
 
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 8:18 pm
Lovely, it produces a vague and distorted image, very much like ripples across the surface of a pool.
 
savetheplanet replied...
Sept. 3, 2011 at 1:55 pm
:) Then it did what it was supposed to do!
 
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