A bright blue marble
Floating through empty black space
Laced with clouds and green
Floating through empty black space
Laced with clouds and green
Thesilentraven
Wow. Definitely my favorite haiku of yours. By comparing the earth to a marble floating through 'empty black space,' you're certainly capturing our minisculity in a vast universe. The last line really perfected the idea, I found, for some reason.
Even you Raven, are very small ;). Jk, you're still a masterful artist. :D
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