August 23, 2011
A bright blue marble
Floating through empty black space
Laced with clouds and green

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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 5:09 pm
Wow. Definitely my favorite haiku of yours. By comparing the earth to a marble floating through 'empty black space,' you're certainly capturing our minisculity in a vast universe. The last line really perfected the idea, I found, for some reason.
savetheplanet replied...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 12:33 pm
Even you Raven, are very small ;).  Jk, you're still a masterful artist. :D
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