Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Earth Earth August 23, 2011 By savetheplanet, Anaheim, CA More by this author A bright blue marble Floating through empty black space Laced with clouds and green « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion Login This article has 2 comments. Post your own now! Report abuse Thesilentraven said... Sept. 9, 2011 at 5:09 pm Wow. Definitely my favorite haiku of yours. By comparing the earth to a marble floating through 'empty black space,' you're certainly capturing our minisculity in a vast universe. The last line really perfected the idea, I found, for some reason. savetheplanet replied... Sept. 10, 2011 at 12:33 pm Even you Raven, are very small ;). Jk, you're still a masterful artist. :D Reply Email me when someone replies Share on Facebook
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