It Shifts Under Our Weight

August 27, 2011
By Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn't do.
-Red Scott


Shaking quietly
To move those who defiled
Earth with their debris



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on Oct. 16 2011 at 7:16 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn't do.
-Red Scott

I will, as soon as I can.

on Oct. 15 2011 at 8:30 pm
SassyJones GOLD, Los Altos Hills, California
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"We make our fourtunes, and we call them fate" earl of beaconsville.

im glad someone else is passionate about the earth. check out my haiku about nature? its called crow's wings

on Sep. 10 2011 at 5:05 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
24 articles 0 photos 382 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn't do.
-Red Scott

Please tell me what you think. Is it effective? Is it not? I don't know much about writing haikus, so I need feedbacks and ratings to tell me how I did.

on Aug. 31 2011 at 5:35 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
24 articles 0 photos 382 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn't do.
-Red Scott

Earth. Thanks.

Dude123 SILVER said...
on Aug. 30 2011 at 2:46 pm
Dude123 SILVER, Ft. Lauderdale, Florida
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Is this about the grass or earth?  Either way, nice way of expressing how the planet sort of shivers in the face of man




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