It Shifts Under Our Weight

August 27, 2011
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Shaking quietly
To move those who defiled
Earth with their debris

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SassyJones said...
Oct. 15, 2011 at 8:30 pm
im glad someone else is passionate about the earth. check out my haiku about nature? its called crow's wings
Blue4 replied...
Oct. 16, 2011 at 7:16 pm
I will, as soon as I can.
Blue4 said...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 5:05 pm
Please tell me what you think. Is it effective? Is it not? I don't know much about writing haikus, so I need feedbacks and ratings to tell me how I did.
Dude123 said...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 2:46 pm
Is this about the grass or earth?  Either way, nice way of expressing how the planet sort of shivers in the face of man
Blue4 replied...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 5:35 pm
Earth. Thanks.
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