Snowdrops

August 27, 2011
The sound of windchimes
softly play. I shovel new
borne snow, cleansed is soul.





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Brinagirl2014 said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 5:02 pm
it may be a short poem, but it is an amazing one!
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 6:49 pm
Thank you, it's called a haiku :)
 
PinkSparksFly said...
Mar. 23, 2012 at 10:04 pm
I could feel the chill throughout it :) lovely
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Mar. 23, 2012 at 10:09 pm
Gracias, Pink :)
 
lilmartz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 11:53 pm
Love this! I love the imagery of windchimes and snow...plus, I think the title is really cute. Nice haiku :)
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 11:34 am
Diola lle :) I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!
 
MoraleAsh said...
Dec. 25, 2011 at 11:20 pm
Since it's Christmas and there is absolutely no sign of snow in Chicago, this makes me want it even more! I love the fresh aura of this piece. Great job!
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 4:46 pm
Haha, we haven't been getting a whole lot of snow either. At least it wasn't muddy this year... Thankee for the comment!
 
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Oct. 7, 2011 at 10:56 pm
I'm with campeador.I can't write haiku's , but girl , you do it well. Awesome job!
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 4:14 pm
A thousand times thanks, Love.Hate.Passion :)
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 5, 2011 at 6:47 pm
A marvelous poem to return to when one is in need of the refreshing air of a whole new world.
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 4:15 pm

Le Hannon, Raven :)

I'm sorry I didn't reply to this earlier, I must have missed the email or something. 

 
Aderes47 replied...
Mar. 3, 2012 at 9:07 pm
When I hear windchmes in my neighborhood and the wind is blowing, it seems like almost somethings magical is going to happen. You know? 
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Mar. 5, 2012 at 4:21 pm
Totally, especially when it's raining or snowing, it's like the world's being born anew or like some sort of a veil is melting away.
 
BrightBurningCampeador This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 7:03 pm
I generally don't like writing haikus (too restrictive) so I admire people who do and do it well. Good job!
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 7:18 pm
Thanks, Bright :)
 
Stay_Strong said...
Sept. 1, 2011 at 8:28 am
Girl, you have a way with words. :)
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Sept. 1, 2011 at 4:21 pm
Awww, hantale (thanks) Heather.
 
leafy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 9:44 am
I really like this. It's short, but very beautiful. Keep up the great work!!5/5
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 5:24 pm
Thank you very much, Leafy :D
 
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