August 24, 2011
Buried alive here
I dig towards the bright light
But dirt keeps falling

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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 5:33 pm
A very powerful image, and a very distressing one. It reminded me, for some reason, of the movie 127 Hours, probably because of the feeling of helplessness it conveys. Quite a nice haiku to start out with!
savetheplanet replied...
Aug. 28, 2011 at 10:23 am
The picture kind of reminds of 127 hours as well.  Thanks! <3
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