Judging is Vanity

June 12, 2011
Judge not, I am me.
I hope someday life will be
Free of vanity.

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Aug. 18, 2011 at 7:07 am

I like how this haiku has a theme, but I kind of prefer haikus that don't rhyme. Maybe you haven't noticed, but a rhyming haiku has a more stangant flow than a freeverse one.

Also could you please read my haiku callled "Rain boots" so that you could make comments on its improvement?

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