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Judging is Vanity

Judge not, I am me.
I hope someday life will be
Free of vanity.




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Aug. 18, 2011 at 7:07 am:

I like how this haiku has a theme, but I kind of prefer haikus that don't rhyme. Maybe you haven't noticed, but a rhyming haiku has a more stangant flow than a freeverse one.

Also could you please read my haiku callled "Rain boots" so that you could make comments on its improvement?

 
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