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Many little leaves
Arranged like growing pebbles On a tender bough



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FrAme said...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 1:00 am
Visually simple, but it's emotional standing is so much more complex.
 
Sophie Rose C. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 5:03 am
thank you for a thoughtful, lovely comment
 
dancestar said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 4:09 pm
tht was very pretty...just one question..what does the title mean? and plz check out sum of my work like "Girl Next Door" and a piece tht is pending publishing "Free!!" "Alone" and "A Love Unreciprocated" thanks! and keep writing!
 
Harebelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 12:17 pm
Pretty! I like the line about growing pebbles- it's very original. One suggestion: you could use a different two-syllable word in the first line instead of 'many', but it does work the way it is so that's just if you want to. Great job!
 
Sophie Rose C. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 12:40 pm
thank you! your adivice is very useful. That first word was indeed quite tricky to place. I will think on it more!
 
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