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Summertime...so short

Summertime.....so short
Of a precious time...COME BACK!!....
Snowflakes on the grass...





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hippiechick99 said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 4:01 pm
I love summer too...even though I live in Texas and it gets up to like 120 degrees. Loved the poem :P
 
ZxarraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 4:46 pm
Yeah I love summer too but snowflakes on the grass is such a pretty thing that it probably would cancel out my wishing for summer but that's just me. I definitely like the poem!
 
amigasr4evr said...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 5:39 pm
totally, dude! ;) lol
 
SkimKimchi said...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 4:23 pm
I wish summertime was longer, too :'(  And i like Haiku, too. But enjoy today, that's why it's called present :D
 
amigasr4evr replied...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 4:27 pm
exactly! :) but there are nice things about every season. :)
 
SkimKimchi replied...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 5:32 pm
That's very true :)  with Lots of fun memories.
 
SkimKimchi replied...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 5:42 pm
             Great haiku :)
 
amigasr4evr replied...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 5:45 pm
thx! i like ur work too.
 
SkimKimchi replied...
Sept. 20, 2011 at 1:36 pm
Gracias :D And I don't know how write Haiku... Lol
 
amigasr4evr replied...
Sept. 20, 2011 at 1:49 pm

its pretty easy. 

1st stansa: 5 syllables

2nd: 7 syl.

3rd: 5 syl.

 

the main theme is supposed to be about nature, but of course you can "break the rules" sometimes.

 
SkimKimchi replied...
Sept. 21, 2011 at 2:25 pm
Ooooh.. I see.  And i forgot, what's a syllable?
 
amigasr4evr replied...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 1:57 pm
A unit of pronunciation having one vowel sound, with or without surrounding consonants, forming the whole or a part of a word; e.g., there are two syllables in water and three in inferno.
 
SkimKimchi replied...
Sept. 27, 2011 at 2:07 pm
Oh i see! Muncho gracias!!
 
amigasr4evr replied...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 9:34 am
np! hope this will help. maybe u can post some haikus now on teen ink. will b waitn....
 
SkimKimchi replied...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 2:29 pm
What's "np" ? And yeah sounds fun; i should make some Haiku :D
 
amigasr4evr replied...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 2:35 pm
np=no problem.n yeah im looking forward to it... :)
 
SkimKimchi replied...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 4:46 pm
                                 ^_^
 
SkimKimchi replied...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 1:57 pm
Mucho gracias, amiga! :D
 
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