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July 30, 2011
By PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"Stay golden"
- Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)


there
is
no
going
back
and words won't save me
no matter
how
i arrange them


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on Aug. 29 2011 at 4:42 pm
Sarahhhhhhh BRONZE, Malden, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"The silence depressed me. It wasn't the silence of silence. It was my own silence."
- Sylvia Plath, The Bell Jar

insanely perfect. this is what i strive for in my poetry, the most meaning crammed into as few words as possible. amazing. 

on Aug. 10 2011 at 11:23 am
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
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This is so perfect.

 

So perfect....

I loved every single thing about this. The way you arrange the words, and then said no matter how you arrange them. The meaning is so deep and powerful, all packed into one short poem. Amazing work.


on Aug. 9 2011 at 3:10 pm
baaaaaaaaaab BRONZE, Clemmons, North Carolina
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This is honestly really amazing! It makes me so jealous of the talent you have! You were able to say so much in so few words, and make it so everyone could relate. This is truly one of my favorite poems ever.


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