July 30, 2011
and words won't save me
no matter
i arrange them

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sarahology This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 4:42 pm
insanely perfect. this is what i strive for in my poetry, the most meaning crammed into as few words as possible. amazing. 
ohheyyyelli said...
Aug. 10, 2011 at 11:23 am

This is so perfect.


So perfect....

I loved every single thing about this. The way you arrange the words, and then said no matter how you arrange them. The meaning is so deep and powerful, all packed into one short poem. Amazing work.

TheGirlWithNoFace said...
Aug. 9, 2011 at 3:10 pm
This is honestly really amazing! It makes me so jealous of the talent you have! You were able to say so much in so few words, and make it so everyone could relate. This is truly one of my favorite poems ever.
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