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Life is a rainbow
But the colors are fading
And now black and white

Life is a voyage
But the tempest wrecked my ship
And now sinking down

Life is a shelter
But the tsunami hit it
It cannot be home

No, life is weather
It might have been raining hard
But it is changing...





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cookiegirl said...
Sept. 3, 2011 at 5:19 am
This is creative and emotional:) And the words are powerful.
 
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 2:01 pm

I like the emotion and thought that was put into this.

I like how the stanza's have their own little topic. It was nice!

 
mokona said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 10:04 pm
That was nice. I liked the effect of the last stanza. All the rest is about life going down, then bam it's up at last. It gives off a satisfying feeling.
 
JerseyGirl716 replied...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 12:30 am
I couldn't agree more. Great job!
 
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