A wish because I
Want it. Fatal since with it,
I’m not me at all.
Want it. Fatal since with it,
I’m not me at all.
CalliashiI feel this way a lot. Good job putting it into such simple words!
FreedomIsMyVirtueI like this haiku. I like the meaning and how you express it! Great job!
Love.Hate.Passion.I understan what your trying to say , but the wording is odd. I understand that it's a haiku and that it has to be written a certain way.
Otherwise , good job. It said alot with a little :)
JerseyGirl716I actually really liked the wording, and i definitely grasped the meaning. Great job! 5/5 :)
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