Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > A Fatal Wish A Fatal Wish By Garnet77, Sinagpore, Singapore More by this author Want it. Fatal since with it, I’m not me at all. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 5 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Calliashi said... Oct. 31, 2011 at 9:44 am: I feel this way a lot. Good job putting it into such simple words! Report abuse FreedomIsMyVirtue said... Sept. 6, 2011 at 5:21 am: I like this haiku. I like the meaning and how you express it! Great job! Report abuse Love.Hate.Passion. said... Aug. 4, 2011 at 11:06 am: I understan what your trying to say , but the wording is odd. I understand that it's a haiku and that it has to be written a certain way. Otherwise , good job. It said alot with a little :) JerseyGirl716 replied... Aug. 8, 2011 at 1:02 pm : I actually really liked the wording, and i definitely grasped the meaning. Great job! 5/5 :) MorenSore replied... Aug. 14, 2011 at 10:09 am : Oddly worded but in a philosophical way.