A Fatal Wish

July 29, 2011
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A wish because I
Want it. Fatal since with it,
I’m not me at all.

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Calliashi said...
Oct. 31, 2011 at 9:44 am
I feel this way a lot. Good job putting it into such simple words!
FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 5:21 am
I like this haiku. I like the meaning and how you express it! Great job!
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 11:06 am

I understan what your trying to say , but the wording is odd. I understand that it's a haiku and that it has to be written a certain way.

Otherwise , good job. It said alot with a little :)

JerseyGirl716 replied...
Aug. 8, 2011 at 1:02 pm
I actually really liked the wording, and i definitely grasped the meaning. Great job! 5/5 :)
MorenSore replied...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 10:09 am
Oddly worded but in a philosophical way.
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