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River

A murky river
Runs through the barren landscape
Twisting and turning



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CarrieAnn13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 1:27 pm:
Great haiku!  It makes sense and even with only a few words, gives the reader vivid imagery.  :)
 
MissColleenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 1:47 pm :
Thanks! I wrote it staring at a river, so I hoped that everyone could picture what I saw(:
 
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