The still of black
My ancient little house groans
Under night's pressure
My ancient little house groans
Under night's pressure
CarrieAnn13
This is great! My only criticism is that the first line only had four syllables instead of five.
I missed yet another word in my poem. Why do I do this so much? lol The first line is supposed to be: The still of the black
Yeah, if you keep missing words then you definitely need to do a bit more proofreading. Next time you could try posting on the forums for feedback. It's always nice to have another set of eyes looking at your work. :)
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