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Sunrise

Early morning's light
Pale streaks across a new sky
Sun and moon as one



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CarrieAnn13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 5:04 pm:
You write excellent haikus!  This one in particular gives the reader a very beautiful picture in their head.  Great imagery!
 
thetruthawaits94This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 10:47 pm :
your haikus are wondeful. i love them all! I'm so wordy, i'm not very good at writing them so i am completely amazed at how much imagery you create in such a short poem such as haiku. great job! And that goes for all your haikus i read! :)
 
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