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Night Time

A night for loving
Dark, scary, beautiful
The stars come to dance



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thetruthawaits94 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 10:40 pm:
I love this! the stars come to dance... how perfect. :)
 
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ohheyyyelli said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 11:08 am:
This is amazing! Lovelovelove it.
 
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CarrieAnn13 said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 5:05 pm:
Great haiku!  But the second line was only six syllables instead of seven.
 
MissColleen replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 11:05 pm :
Oops, I missed a word (again!). Second line is: Dark, scary, and beautiful
 
CarrieAnn13 replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 11:52 pm :
Maybe you should proofread a little more before submitting, then.
 
MissColleen replied...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 10:33 am :
I have them all on a document in Word and I just copy and paste without proofing...
 
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