Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > To You From... To You From... By YesThatsWhyTheyFly, Concord, NC More by this author Maybe one day you will hear The gift is to hear « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 4 comments. Post your own! Report abuse sakina said... Jul. 18, 2011 at 6:41 am: I do agree with the what the other's are saying...And it's simple..nice:) Report abuse booklover04 said... Jul. 16, 2011 at 2:36 pm: i like the simplicity the poem has but for a very short poem i think the word "hear" being used twice was an overkill. nice poem though :) Uglification replied... Jul. 16, 2011 at 3:39 pm : I agree with booklover04. Sometimes when words are repeated, it hits you over the head. However, I think if you changed a few things around, this would be really great. This is my favourite out the stuff you have submitted. :) It's really quite beautiful with it's simplicity. Maybe if you added some punctuation, the meaning would be a little more clear, and the poem would be easier to understand. YesThatsWhyTheyFly replied... Jul. 16, 2011 at 5:43 pm : Thank you, I see what you're saying!