Stay Away

July 3, 2011
By Autumn-Rain SILVER, West Lafayette, Indiana
Autumn-Rain SILVER, West Lafayette, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Stay Away

You can’t see who I am

Be happy with my surface shell


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on Jul. 18 2011 at 5:02 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

I like this! It's simple, but I like the way you did this. 

on Jul. 18 2011 at 5:13 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

Hey, I didn'y sat it's bad! It's actually good that you're creating your ownn style... :)

on Jul. 18 2011 at 4:12 am
Autumn-Rain SILVER, West Lafayette, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 74 comments
Well... that's a true Japenese haicu... but I've seen many Haicus that aren't that form... just have a total count of 17 syllables...

on Jul. 18 2011 at 2:57 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

A haiku is of 5-7-5 lines.
Yours is 3-6-8. It's not the typical haiku though but who says you can't make your own style?!

Nice try, though...


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