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Looking in your eyes
I don't see just one color
I see a rainbow!



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NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 3:35 pm:
Cool haiku :)
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 4:58 pm :
Gee thanks!
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 7:19 pm :
Cool screen name!
 
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musicispassion said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 1:17 pm:
u r so creative how do u come up with theses do they just come to u or what? ur talented keep on writing
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 4:54 pm :
I usually think about something ordinary (like an eye) and then try to give it either a fun or a deeper meaning. Also, reading other people's work on TI gives me a chance to see what's popular. It's all about trying to come up with something that hasn't already been written. (There must be a million break up songs out there!)  
 
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redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 11:25 am:
^^ I have more haiku on TI if you want to check it out!
 
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Uga10This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 9:59 am:
its good and by the way people, its supposed to be short.its a Haiku.lol
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 5:05 pm :
Cute dog pic on your profile!
 
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sakina said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 12:44 am:
It's nice but as Fox said there should have been more to it...But It's good:)
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 6:52 pm :
Thanks for looking at my work!
 
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ritabelle511 said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 11:07 pm:
Haha, what a cute haiku! :) Short, sweet, and to the point.
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 12:26 am :
Thank you!
 
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Ryalynn said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 8:32 pm:
that soo amazing
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 10:27 pm :
Thank you!
 
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BrightBurningCampeadorThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 8:13 pm:
The thing I don't like about haikus is that they are so short! I want to hear more of this poem, find deeper meaning than three lines allow at first glance!
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 10:27 pm :
I would love to make the poem longer!
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 5:06 pm :
Right now it's a simple haiku, but I'm thinking about turning it into a long free verse poem!
 
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Delictious said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 5:36 pm:
Simple but has a great message!
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 12:26 am :
I love haiku because it is sooooo simple!
 
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alex198 said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 3:14 pm:
Aw, wow. That's such a sweet poem :) I really liked it.
 
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