Looking in your eyes
I don't see just one color
I see a rainbow!
I don't see just one color
I see a rainbow!
NinjaGirl
Cool haiku :)
musicispassionu r so creative how do u come up with theses do they just come to u or what? ur talented keep on writing
I usually think about something ordinary (like an eye) and then try to give it either a fun or a deeper meaning. Also, reading other people's work on TI gives me a chance to see what's popular. It's all about trying to come up with something that hasn't already been written. (There must be a million break up songs out there!)
^^ I have more haiku on TI if you want to check it out!
Uga10its good and by the way people, its supposed to be short.its a Haiku.lol
sakinaIt's nice but as Fox said there should have been more to it...But It's good:)
ritabelle511Haha, what a cute haiku! :) Short, sweet, and to the point.
Ryalynnthat soo amazing
BrightBurningCampeadorThe thing I don't like about haikus is that they are so short! I want to hear more of this poem, find deeper meaning than three lines allow at first glance!
Right now it's a simple haiku, but I'm thinking about turning it into a long free verse poem!
DelictiousSimple but has a great message!
alex198Aw, wow. That's such a sweet poem :) I really liked it.
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