Seeing Your Soul

July 10, 2011
By redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"


Looking in your eyes
I don't see just one color
I see a rainbow!



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on Jul. 18 2011 at 5:16 pm
fictitious-quandary GOLD, Orlando, Florida
18 articles 5 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
Knowing is not enough; we must apply.
Willing is not enough; we must do.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

"Whether you think you can or you think you can't, you're right"
- Henry Ford

 Your a wonderful writer but I prefer length, to me a three line poem is just a tease, much like the commercials to all the wonderful movies I want to see, just a small portion, expand on your writing because your thoughts are great! :)

on Jul. 18 2011 at 2:14 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Thank you everyone for your comments. I really appreciate the feedback!

on Jul. 16 2011 at 12:28 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

That is such a sweet comment! Thanks!

on Jul. 16 2011 at 12:26 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Thank you!

on Jul. 16 2011 at 12:26 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

I love haiku because it is sooooo simple!

Blondie said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 11:18 pm
Your haiku can pertain to a sensitivity to others as unique individuals,i.e.recognizing and respecting people of different races, creeds, etc.

on Jul. 14 2011 at 5:06 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Right now it's a simple haiku, but I'm thinking about turning it into a long free verse poem!

on Jul. 14 2011 at 5:05 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Cute dog pic on your profile!

on Jul. 14 2011 at 5:00 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

I have this idea that our eyes are the windows to our soul.

on Jul. 14 2011 at 4:58 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Gee thanks!

on Jul. 14 2011 at 4:54 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

I usually think about something ordinary (like an eye) and then try to give it either a fun or a deeper meaning. Also, reading other people's work on TI gives me a chance to see what's popular. It's all about trying to come up with something that hasn't already been written. (There must be a million break up songs out there!)  

on Jul. 14 2011 at 3:35 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
1 article 0 photos 202 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.
~Some random person on the Internet :P

Cool haiku :)

on Jul. 14 2011 at 1:17 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

u r so creative how do u come up with theses do they just come to u or what? ur talented keep on writing

on Jul. 14 2011 at 11:25 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

^^ I have more haiku on TI if you want to check it out!

on Jul. 14 2011 at 11:24 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

I'm glad that you all like it so much!

Uga10 SILVER said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 9:59 am
Uga10 SILVER, Verbena, Alabama
5 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Money grows on the tree of persistance!

its good and by the way people, its supposed to be short.its a Haiku.lol

on Jul. 14 2011 at 8:12 am
CieraDesiree GOLD, Hagerstown, Indiana
17 articles 1 photo 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
An eye for an eye only makes the whole world blind.
You never know what you have until it's gone.

I love this one=)

sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 12:44 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

It's nice but as Fox said there should have been more to it...But It's good:)

austenite GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 11:07 pm
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
13 articles 0 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

Haha, what a cute haiku! :) Short, sweet, and to the point.

on Jul. 13 2011 at 10:27 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

I would love to make the poem longer!




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