Seeing Your Soul

July 10, 2011
By redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"


Looking in your eyes
I don't see just one color
I see a rainbow!



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on Feb. 27 2013 at 1:21 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

:) It was a fun poem to write - thank you!

on Feb. 27 2013 at 1:20 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Thank you so much! :)

on Jul. 24 2012 at 12:44 pm
LongLazyDays55 BRONZE, Other, Other
3 articles 0 photos 95 comments

Favorite Quote:
I haven't failed. I just haven't found 10,000 ways that won't work. [Thomas Edison]

When words fail, music speaks.

I LOVE this! Really powerful and it made me smile. The last line is so good: 'I see a rainbow!' Keep writing! :) 5 stars!

on Aug. 14 2011 at 1:11 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
10 articles 0 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." - Michelangelo
"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am." - Sylvia Plath

aw, you made me smile!! LOVE this so much!! keep writing...and check out my poems too!

on Aug. 10 2011 at 3:14 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Thank you for the feedback!

on Aug. 10 2011 at 3:14 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Oh - that's so sweet! That was one of the best compliments I ever received on my work!

on Aug. 7 2011 at 12:51 am
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
0 articles 0 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~
~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~
~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than
a distant memory.~

This was amazing. You made me smile with just three lines , and I actually felt amyriad of emotions with it. Short , sweet , and right to the point :)

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on Aug. 3 2011 at 12:13 pm
This is Eirias, by the way.

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on Aug. 3 2011 at 12:12 pm
It's good. I can't really offer changes, because anything I do would be mine and not yours. Also haikus are very structured so to make any changes would mess the whole thing up.

on Jul. 31 2011 at 4:50 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Thanks! Any type of feedback is welcome!

Shadow878 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 12:50 pm
Shadow878 GOLD, Marion, Indiana
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I tell you the truth, unless you change and become like little children, you will never enter the kingdom of heaven." Matthew 18:3

"Do not pray for easy lives, pray to be stronger men." JFK

“Science without religion is lame, religion without science is blind.”Albert Einstein

"I believe in Christianity as I believe that the sun has risen: not only because I see it, but because by it I see everything else."
C. S. Lewis

"A young man who wishes to remain a sound atheist cannot be too careful of his reading."
C. S. Lewis

"Anyone who doesn’t believe in miracles is not a realist."
David Ben-Gurion

"An eye for an eye makes the world go blind" Gandi

It's good but it's short blurbs like that, that can be crafted into great poems and stories. I say keep working on it.

P.S. Just wanted to give you some contructive critisim


on Jul. 26 2011 at 4:46 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

And thank you for checking out my work!

on Jul. 25 2011 at 4:35 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Thank you.

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 11:54 am
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

Fun, short, sweet. =)

on Jul. 24 2011 at 3:20 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Thanks so much!

on Jul. 24 2011 at 3:20 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

I really appreciate it!

on Jul. 24 2011 at 12:27 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Thanks, Beaver!

Beaver said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 12:25 pm
It's  a wonderful simple poem that makes you reflect on the diversity of the people all around us.

on Jul. 23 2011 at 11:54 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

The "eyes" have it!

on Jul. 22 2011 at 11:14 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Thank you!




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