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Beat me black and blue,
That is all you ever do.
But your words hurt more.



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ohheyyyelli said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 1:11 pm:

It really is powerful, I think the shortness of it packs more of a punch also.

 

 
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hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 7:52 pm:
Amazing like i said on the forums!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
 
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redhairCatThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 8:28 pm:
Powerful! Really powerful!
 
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xXx_Fox_xXxThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 5:56 pm:
Aw!!! It great but too short! I wish there was more!
 
CieraDesiree replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 8:23 am :
Thank you=)
 
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