Journey

June 15, 2011
By Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments

Open up the door,
we are ready to go now,
our journey begins.


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on Aug. 1 2011 at 1:02 am
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thanks! I think it's fine as is, plus it needed the syllable.

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:44 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

Short but meaningful. Kudos for that but 'now' in the second line seems not to fit. =">

on Jul. 7 2011 at 8:06 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thanks! :)

on Jul. 7 2011 at 8:05 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thanks! :)

on Jul. 7 2011 at 5:43 pm
Zinaidia SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
8 articles 3 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"Whatever you are, be a good one.\\\"

It is simple and straight to the point, but it is very inspiring too! I don't see many people who can pull of haikus, but you did it!

on Jul. 5 2011 at 11:36 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." - Michelangelo
"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am." - Sylvia Plath

it's sweet and simple with a ton of meaning!


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