Journey

June 15, 2011
Open up the door,
we are ready to go now,
our journey begins.





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Alon_Freevoice said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:44 am
Short but meaningful. Kudos for that but 'now' in the second line seems not to fit. =">
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 1:02 am
Thanks! I think it's fine as is, plus it needed the syllable.
 
Zinaidia said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 5:43 pm
It is simple and straight to the point, but it is very inspiring too! I don't see many people who can pull of haikus, but you did it!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 8:06 pm
Thanks! :)
 
Dia.dreamer said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 11:36 am
it's sweet and simple with a ton of meaning!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 8:05 pm
Thanks! :)
 
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