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Give up? No, never
Run, run til the finish line
Is in a hand’s reach.





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hippiechick99 said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 4:21 pm
I love this poem!!!! One of my favorites from you...I'm sad now I've read all of you're haikus; loved all of them. I believe you have a gift in writing :))
 
iamfeelingud replied...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 5:46 pm
awwww! thanks that means a lot to me!! :)
 
EverlastingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 5:05 pm
so good . simple but with meaning . i
 
crazycoolcritter replied...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 5:06 pm
Thanks so much!! :)
 
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 4:23 pm
Why are you acting like this is your poem crazycoolcritter?? iamfeelingud wrote this. I'm just wondering...
 
iamfeelingud replied...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 5:45 pm
i changed my name after i wrote this. My previous name was crazycoolcritter, but now its imfeelingud
 
Turbocharger said...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 12:39 pm
I definitely dig it
 
crazycoolcritter replied...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 5:03 pm
Thanks!! And i totally dig your name!! lol please check out and rate/comment on my othe work. Thanks!!!!
 
callie15 said...
Dec. 25, 2011 at 10:27 pm
Wow, this is really good! Haiku's are hard to write, and this is one of the best I've seen on this website :)
 
crazycoolcritter replied...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 12:36 pm
wow!!! Thanks so much! Glad u really like it. :) Happy New Years!!! Please check out my other work and rate/comment whenever you have some spare time. Thanks!!
 
SkimKimchi said...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 4:26 pm
             Great! :D
 
amigasr4evr replied...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 7:56 pm
thank you. hope this was/is an encouragement to you
 
SkimKimchi replied...
Sept. 20, 2011 at 1:30 pm
It helped me a lot :)
 
amigasr4evr replied...
Sept. 20, 2011 at 6:46 pm
im glad to hear that! ure encouraging me, too. :D
 
SkimKimchi replied...
Sept. 21, 2011 at 2:27 pm
My plesure :)
 
Megan.J.BThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 1:28 pm
very powerful! :) 
 
amigasr4evr replied...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 12:53 pm
thx so much!! please check out my other work when you get a chance. :)
 
TAR11 said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 8:36 am
I like the power despite how short it is.  Please check out my work if you get the chance. 
 
amigasr4evr replied...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 12:55 pm

thank you for the feedback!! would you have liked it to be a bit longer? again, this is a HAIKU, not like a sonnet...

...and yes, id luv to check out ur stuff.

 
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