Summer Lightbeams

June 2, 2011
Summertime, sun beams
Touching my cool, silky skin
In the break of dawn.

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hippiechick99 said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 4:18 pm
I thought this was a great poem :))
EHunt96 said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 4:15 pm
Simple but beautiful! I love this!
crazycoolcritter replied...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 4:20 pm
Thanks Ehunt! :) glad u like it....i miss the warm summer sunshine. What bout u?
AnimaCordis said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 5:34 pm
wow, wish i was there!
crazycoolcritter replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 9:54 pm
Why, the happiness and serenity of your inner self is the temple of eternal sunshine!! :)
ByThisBlindingLight said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 4:55 pm
ur haikus are very pretty :D
crazycoolcritter replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 9:31 pm
Thank you very much!! I like ur poems too. :)
glimmer said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 4:47 pm


Cute haiku! Great description:)

crazycoolcritter replied...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 5:58 pm
thank youso much!! please check out my other work ...thanks! :)
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