June 12, 2011
Black, blue, up now down,
Bruise after bruise line my arms,
My record of pain.

Join the Discussion

This article has 7 comments. Post your own now!

Garnet77 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 12:26 am
I really love haikus, because they're so short, but they can say so much. It's kind of sad that people abuse themselves and are abused. This is really good. 
musicispassion said...
Jul. 10, 2011 at 1:29 pm
it's sad to think that people abuse and abuse themselves good job
alex198 said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 9:17 am
Love it! Especially the last line. It was really good :)
writer_girl said...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 3:18 pm
Very powerful. Nice work!
CieraDesiree said...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 3:15 pm
Very simple, yet lots of meaning. LOVE IT!
Zinaidia replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 9:27 pm
Wow, short but has a strong message. Personally I can relate to it (mom wasn't the nicest person) so this really touched my heart. Good job :) 5 stars!
Zinaidia replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 9:28 pm
I'm adding this to my favorite list thing by the way :D
Site Feedback