Black, blue, up now down,
Bruise after bruise line my arms,
My record of pain.
Bruise after bruise line my arms,
My record of pain.
Garnet77
I really love haikus, because they're so short, but they can say so much. It's kind of sad that people abuse themselves and are abused. This is really good.
musicispassionit's sad to think that people abuse and abuse themselves good job
alex198Love it! Especially the last line. It was really good :)
CieraDesireeVery simple, yet lots of meaning. LOVE IT!
Wow, short but has a strong message. Personally I can relate to it (mom wasn't the nicest person) so this really touched my heart. Good job :) 5 stars!
I'm adding this to my favorite list thing by the way :D
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