The secret

I have a secret
It is quite evil and dark
No one will know it





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sherberteater said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 1:54 pm

I agree, you should of made it longer. You could of gone more in depth why they were keeping this secret from the world. Or you could of told us clues about this secret.

 

 
DarkenRose replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 2:38 pm
I know I should have but I wrote this during school and my teacher told me a huiku had to be short
 
sherberteater replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 2:49 pm

Well, you could of handed it in at school as a haiku, and then when he handed it back to you could of changed it to a normal length poem.

 

 
DarkenRose replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 3:10 pm
I should have done that, I'll fix this poem as soon as I can thanks
 
sherberteater replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 5:30 pm

Hey, I glad to help anytime. Good luck with the rest of the poem.

 

 
sakina said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 9:38 am
Shart and Nice..Maybe u should've Written some more line..
 
Illuminatus replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 4:18 am
yup ... agree wid sakina ....
 
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