Happy Hobby

June 3, 2011
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If being happy
is your favorite hobby,
You would be happy.





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Emily.L said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 4:00 pm
Kind of different...it's so obvious that it's almost not? I'm not really sure if I like it or if I like trying to figure it out...
 
FreedomIsMyVirtue replied...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 6:10 pm
And I'm trying to figure out your comment... O.o :)
 
bookworm29 said...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 6:43 pm
Its abit confusing at first but once you understand it, you find a heap of meaning behind it.
 
NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 2:59 am
Hmmm... I'm not really sure what to say about your haiku. It's kind of, I don't know, repetitive, I guess. There's not much depth to it. Maybe it would work better to rewrite it as a longer poem so your readers can get more out of it. :)
 
Alon_Freevoice replied...
Jun. 24, 2011 at 12:49 am
Thanks for criticizing it. I hope I get better with my other poems.
 
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