Cannibals

April 30, 2011
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A great civil war
Brother fights against brother
Cannibals on the loose

Hungry for our own flesh
Bloodthirsty soldiers ready to feast
Human consumption

Just as we turn our backs
The enemy sinks their lethal teeth
Into our raw meat

Humanity is lost
On war’s shady battle lines
Predator or prey

Perpetual turmoil
Where I eat you and you eat me
Cannibalistic





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baller4eva This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 8:12 pm

I liked how you made each stanza a poem in itself. Only critque I have is grammar

On War's shady battle lines

 
hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 7:29 pm
Hungry for our own flesh
Bloodthirsty soldiers ready to feast
Human consumption

 ^^ Like she said, " Bravo!"
 
sakina said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 12:33 am
It's amazing...!:)Bravo's...!:D
 
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