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Butterflies of my mind

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Flutters of colors
Flying to leaf and flowers
The thoughts in my head



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IamtheshyStargirl said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 12:15 pm

You did a great job, it's just that it doesn't really convey emotion, and for all of the imagery, it's very vague.

Keep up the good work, and I'm sure you'll go far, Justberne :)

 
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