Lune This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

January 24, 2008
One shimmering eye
stares at me through the window.
Don’t leave me, sweet moon.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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life_of_a_leaf said...
Jan. 5, 2010 at 3:00 pm
very creative haiku. i like how you used personification.
Mostly_Dead replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 7:49 pm
I'm surprised this was brought as haiku.
onelesslonelygirl replied...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 9:23 am
This kept me thinking for awhile. I love it! It's very creative.
Cheyenne D. said...
Jun. 27, 2009 at 5:41 am
isnt an amazing thing when something so small could touch a heart so much?
MorningStar15 said...
Mar. 14, 2009 at 1:36 am
summer_rain341 said...
Feb. 1, 2009 at 5:43 pm
that was beautiful. simple but beautiful!
Marcos said...
Sept. 29, 2008 at 1:38 pm
easy to understand with simply words
Angel C. replied...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 10:06 am
it was not easy 4 me to understand
Amy said...
Sept. 21, 2008 at 7:34 pm
Amazing poem, very inspiring. I find it harder to write short poems than long ones. Good job! ^^
Rayne said...
Sept. 17, 2008 at 3:33 pm
Nice poem. simple, but nice. :) The moon inspires a lot of my poems aswell. Keep up the good POEMS!!!!
harry_potter_fangirl said...
Sept. 17, 2008 at 1:46 am
wow. simple yet inspiring. good job.
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