One shimmering eye
stares at me through the window.
Don’t leave me, sweet moon.
stares at me through the window.
Don’t leave me, sweet moon.
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
Lune
life_of_a_leaf
very creative haiku. i like how you used personification.
Mostly_Dead
onelesslonelygirlThis kept me thinking for awhile. I love it! It's very creative.
Cheyenne D.isnt an amazing thing when something so small could touch a heart so much?
summer_rain341 said...
Feb. 1, 2009 at 5:43 pm:
Feb. 1, 2009 at 5:43 pm:
that was beautiful. simple but beautiful!
Marcos said...
Sept. 29, 2008 at 1:38 pm:
Sept. 29, 2008 at 1:38 pm:
easy to understand with simply words
Angel C.
Amy said...
Sept. 21, 2008 at 7:34 pm:
Sept. 21, 2008 at 7:34 pm:
Amazing poem, very inspiring. I find it harder to write short poems than long ones. Good job! ^^
Rayne said...
Sept. 17, 2008 at 3:33 pm:
Sept. 17, 2008 at 3:33 pm:
Nice poem. simple, but nice. :) The moon inspires a lot of my poems aswell. Keep up the good POEMS!!!!
harry_potter_fangirl said...
Sept. 17, 2008 at 1:46 am:
Sept. 17, 2008 at 1:46 am:
wow. simple yet inspiring. good job.
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