April 18, 2011
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My fingernails stand
On the ends of my fingers
Like tombstones

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LucyInTheSky This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 10:08 pm
this is really great poetry but it would be even better if you expanded a little bit. the vagueness is a great aspect of the poem but it could still be vague if you added some more to it. anyway keep writing great stuff! :)
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