My fingernails stand
On the ends of my fingers
Like tombstones
On the ends of my fingers
Like tombstones
LucyInTheSky
this is really great poetry but it would be even better if you expanded a little bit. the vagueness is a great aspect of the poem but it could still be vague if you added some more to it. anyway keep writing great stuff! :)
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