Nature's stillness breathes,
Opening to the Divine,
Waves of bliss Descend.
Opening to the Divine,
Waves of bliss Descend.
You are and amazing writer! You know that, right?
Why thank you! And also, thank you for commenting on all my work. I really appreciate it...
NinjaGirl
Great word choice. Although haiku can be written about other topics, they are meant to be about nature. This is wonderful example of how a poet can pack a lot of nature's beauty into just seventeen syllables! Keep it up!
Thank you for the nice and thorough comment. And you stuck to ur word on reading my poems, and I stuck to mine in reading yours. By the way, you are very talented. I love all your poems!!! (I don't have a favorite among them because it's hard to choose)
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Beautiful picture and lovely writing(:
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