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Nature's Bliss

Nature's stillness breathes,
Opening to the Divine,
Waves of bliss Descend.



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HaleyDRog. said...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 6:53 pm:
You are and amazing writer! You know that, right?
 
emanmkhan replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 11:43 am :
Why thank you! And also, thank you for commenting on all my work. I really appreciate it...
 
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NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 3:20 pm:
Great word choice.  Although haiku can be written about other topics, they are meant to be about nature. This is wonderful example of how a poet can pack a lot of nature's beauty into just seventeen syllables! Keep it up!
 
emanmkhan replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 7:46 pm :
Thank you for the nice and thorough comment. And you stuck to ur word on reading my poems, and I stuck to mine in reading yours. By the way, you are very talented. I love all your poems!!! (I don't have a favorite among them because it's hard to choose)
 
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Express-- This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 19, 2011 at 3:11 pm:
Beautiful picture and lovely writing(:
 
emanmkhan replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 7:45 pm :
Thank you!!!
 
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