Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Sunshine that I share with you Sunshine that I share with you By Justbeme, Burlington, WA More by this author So there are no cloudy days That I share with you « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 2 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Allthegoodnamesaretaken said... May 1, 2011 at 3:09 pm: This one's realy good. I actually don't have any constructive criticism. It's awesome just the way it is. :) Justbeme replied... May 3, 2011 at 9:56 pm : wow thanks! If you like i could review some of your work. I would really like to get better at writing so if you could look at some of my work that would be awesome!