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So how far Alice?
How far down the Rabbit hole?
You ju2t lead the way.





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babymama888 said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 9:16 pm
ooh i love that kind of thing, taken from other stories. this is so cute:) haikus are so surprising cuz they end so soon!
 
Basketball23 said...
Mar. 12, 2011 at 7:01 pm
This is pretty good :) I don't really like haikus that much, but I really like this one.
 
beach said...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 10:10 am
I really like your haiku, it should be published in the magazine
 
tangem This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 4:28 pm
Whoa, there... 0.o
 
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