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Quick-stepping heart
Flutters like a bird
Happy-crawling skin
And a smile from within

Why is the forbidden fruit
Always the sweetest?

Gazes meet
But only for an instant,
And in an instant,
The amazing instant is gone.

But the effects still remain
A sweet taste of forbidden fruit.

Talking for hours,
Constant happiness.
These series of instants,
I wish would never go.

A seed has been sown,
The seed of a forbidden fruit.





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PumpkinAteKitty said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 8:40 am
Love the poem, only thing i can say is that perhaps "The amazing instant is gone" could have been slightly better worded. Other than that, great poem ^.^ nice flow for the most part and is something people can relate to easily :)
 
Paper_Poetic replied...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 6:07 pm
thank you :D yeah i had some trouble with that line. but i also think i mistyped it. that should be moment. 
 
PumpkinAteKitty replied...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 8:52 pm
ahh, mmk, then with that put in, i can see no flaws, its great ^^
 
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