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Music is my soul

Fake lyrics and music
Unspoken rhymes, deaf singer
As reality sings it

Unfelt emotions
Kept, hidden, lost ideas, lies!
No visual love? lies!

Do you see it, blind?
Dont you feel it, are you dead?
Am I the lie? Lies!




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GreenActress said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 7:17 pm:
Wow. This is amazing. For once I don't have words to describe it. It's different, and yet so meaningful and true. You are amazingly talented! Keep up the good work! Check out some of my work? :)
 
Shahed replied...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 4:34 pm :
Aww well thank you!  when we write the only thing that always matters is how deep we feel it, and i felt that one deep down!
Yes, I sure will check out your work sometime soon!
 
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Howell said...
Jan. 13, 2011 at 7:12 pm:

This one is one of my favorites! You're so thoughtful, using few words of course since it's a haiku.

Again, Shahed, Great job!

 
Shahed replied...
Jan. 14, 2011 at 7:14 pm :
Thank you! I really dont know what to say when I get such comments, :) thank you :) it makes my day
 
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FlyleafFreakThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 13, 2011 at 4:55 pm:
I liked it and, I don't knwo much about haikus but, isn't it supposed to go 5-7-5 or something? Regardless, I liked it good job.
 
Shahed replied...
Apr. 9, 2011 at 11:35 am :
Thank you :) and Yes, its supposed to be .. is it not? lol ,, Thank you again!
 
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