My Reaction To Death

December 9, 2010
By JakeDamon GOLD, Elizabethtown, Pennsylvania
JakeDamon GOLD, Elizabethtown, Pennsylvania
10 articles 4 photos 14 comments

Running from the scythe
Death creeping, not sleeping
I stumble and cry.

Shivering, I stand
Look Death in the eye
he screams and dissolves.

Death shall not return.


The author's comments:
I have never written a Haiku before, nor am I sure that this is the proper way. Please leave some advice if you read this.

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on Dec. 11 2011 at 1:33 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan"
-by. Blood On The Dance Floor

hey lol ive written a hiku before but i lost it when i moved last year but all i can remember is tht it has to 5 7 5.

but lol u should check out my poems, i mean i personally think tht there not tht great but ppl tell me tht there good. so yeah if u get the time plz check out my poems....


lollypops GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2011 at 7:59 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
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wow this was really good to write a hakiu your first verse will have 5 syllables the second should have 7 and the third 5 again it can be mutiple staza but ech stanza follows the formula 5   7    5




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