December 5, 2010
Swinging on tires
Without a care in the world;
Perfect childhood.

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MakeItShine said...
Dec. 23, 2010 at 12:45 pm
This was good, but it was wanting. It lacks substance. Lengthen it, expound on that blissful (or painful) childhood which each of us experiences. Maybe describe the pangs of childhood, the feels and the sights.
dancerforlifex replied...
Dec. 24, 2010 at 8:07 am
Thanks! But sorry, our assignment for class was to write ONE haiku about nature and keep it simple. I just added it to the website, I didn't add on. But thanks for the criticism.
MakeItShine replied...
Dec. 24, 2010 at 8:25 am
My pleasure.
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