me and the doe

November 25, 2010
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doe eyes gaze at me
hidden in the winter white forest
I take a deep breath

eyes on the creature
I raise my gun and take aim
the animal shakes

I quiver with her
our eyes meet for a moment
I turn and head home

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Nick5 said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 6:08 pm
Wow this is cool. Just cool.
nchic said...
Dec. 12, 2010 at 9:11 am

please comment and rate this!!!


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