Summer days

November 17, 2010
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Sunny Summer days
barbeques and families
begining of life





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KLM705 said...
Dec. 6, 2010 at 3:15 pm
i like the firtst line "Sunny summer days," because it remindes me of the fun i have during the sumer and i like the literation of it. This could be a better peom if you make it longer and put more feeling into it. You could add rhetorical devices which make your writting stronger.
 
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