Summer days

November 17, 2010
By LoVuR BRONZE, Cave Junction, Oregon
LoVuR BRONZE, Cave Junction, Oregon
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Sunny Summer days
barbeques and families
begining of life


The author's comments:
I love the summer time it inspires me most!

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KLM705 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 6 2010 at 3:15 pm
KLM705 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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i like the firtst line "Sunny summer days," because it remindes me of the fun i have during the sumer and i like the literation of it. This could be a better peom if you make it longer and put more feeling into it. You could add rhetorical devices which make your writting stronger.


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