Butterfly Fly Away

November 10, 2010
Colors dot the sky,
As butterflies fly on by,
Dreams of Spring beauty.

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writingchick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 28, 2010 at 3:21 pm
Great metaphor in the first sentence! I love this poem!
TheNovaClytie replied...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 6:59 pm
thank you!
nikkigonefishin said...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 8:40 pm
Its just beautiful. Nothing like a glimpse of spring during this cold autumn. Keep writing :]
TheNovaClytie replied...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 7:00 pm
thank you! that's exactly what i was thinking when i wrote this! haha!
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