Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > This is not a haiku. This is not a haiku. By apocalyptigirl, Staunton, VA More by this author of my own thoughts no water can rinse me clean. « Previous article More by this author Next article » September & October Join the Discussion This article has 5 comments. Post your own! Report abuse AlexanderQ said... Dec. 5, 2012 at 7:14 pm: Hi! Like I promised I am reviewing some of your work! I really like this haiku. I like the different and abnormal syllables and structure, however, my stupid perfectionist mind almost wants it to be in regular haiku form, so maybe play around with that? But overall I like the deep meaning of the poem. It really makes you think. Report abuse shadowrider said... Jul. 10, 2011 at 11:32 pm: I love it! Report abuse Markus said... Jan. 7, 2011 at 3:56 pm: I like that you have exactly 17 syllables, in spite of it not having the same structure. I think that was a good way to shake up the poem. apocalyptigirl replied... Jan. 7, 2011 at 6:42 pm : Thanks! I didn't intend that at first, but then I looked back and realized I had them. Markus replied... Jan. 7, 2011 at 7:16 pm : That's awesome. Maybe it was subliminal.