Wicked Lovely

September 30, 2010
Wicked lovely eyes
Staring down at my demise
I have no more cries

Bleeding out my life
With not a gun, not a knife
But with my past's strife

Wicked lovely tears
Reflected at me it peers
The end slowly nears

Me, Myself, and I
Alone with the mirror's cries
And my lone reply

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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 6:14 am

This is so good, I love it! You're just really good at writing and I really hope that you continue with it... you've got a future ahead of you if you want it... I'm sure you do.

Check out my stuff sometime?

Stormlily This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 5, 2011 at 7:42 am
I wish I could find pics that go that well with my writing... amazing poem! 5 stars!
alwaysbrokenhearted said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 6:12 pm
There's nothing i can say that isn't obvious. It's amazing. No wait... IT'S AMAZING!!! I love the theme of it!!! Keep writing and never stop!!!
BleedingRose replied...
Sept. 17, 2011 at 4:49 pm

Thank yo-  erm- THANK-YOU SO MUCH!  haha  =]  btw, ive read some of your stuff, and i rly like it  =]


xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 8:43 pm
i know ive commented on a few of your poems. they just keep getting better:) its like they just keep getting more powerful with each theme. amazingg. plz keep writingg!!
BleedingRose replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 11:16 pm

thx so so much!  i'm happy u can see an improvement and enjoy my work =]  lolz thx again!


AngelForeverBleedingLove This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 12:19 pm


The picture goes strangely well with this poem, I love it!


BleedingRose replied...
Oct. 29, 2010 at 9:58 am


I love that pic  :)


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