Waiting

September 29, 2010
By Picatso1 PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
Picatso1 PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Not all who wander are lost - Lord of the Rings, J.R.R Tolkien
Are you suggesting coconuts migrate? - Monty Python and the Holy Grail


It appears the world
Has long since dissapeared
In the veil of fog.

I stand currently
On the final piece of earth
In the universe.

I am so alone
In this misty world of mine
The silence is still

But I remember
The old world hidden by fog
So I keep waiting

Waiting for the rain
Or snow, or wind, or sleeting
To wash the veil away.

But until that time
I will stand here patiently
And wait for the world.



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on Nov. 19 2010 at 3:58 pm
Picatso1 PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Not all who wander are lost - Lord of the Rings, J.R.R Tolkien
Are you suggesting coconuts migrate? - Monty Python and the Holy Grail

Thanks! I really like your Starry eyes poem. I could never rhyme like that... XD

Phoenixx GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 2:35 pm
Phoenixx GOLD, Toronto, Other
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wow. By the looks of this poem, you must be extremely talented when it comes to writing haiku poems. Very nicely done :D

on Oct. 18 2010 at 6:56 pm
Picatso1 PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
22 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Not all who wander are lost - Lord of the Rings, J.R.R Tolkien
Are you suggesting coconuts migrate? - Monty Python and the Holy Grail

Thank you.

on Oct. 13 2010 at 6:33 pm
CountryChic21 BRONZE, Bruceton Mills, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Side by side or miles apart, good friends are always close to the heart.

This is awesome! I acually get what your saying. Keep writing things like this. Its amazing


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